What is your opinion about the government’s delay of imposing stronger anti-COVID-19 measures despit
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There should be thoughtful considerations to take the social distancing stage up. If strict social distancing is applied simply because the number of infected people rises, it will adversely affect the entire economy. South Korea is a country with many self-employed people, and the majority of them own small businesses and suffering from the influence of covid19. The level should be raised in consideration of support or even preparedness for them.
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There should be thoughtful considerations to take the social distancing stage up.
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OR >>> There should be a deliberation in implementing the new regulation on social distancing.
strict social distancing is applied simply because the number of infected people rises, it will adversely affect the entire economy.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Strict social distancing that was imposed because of the surging of infected people, will unfavorably affect the whole economic status of the country
South Korea is a country with many self-employed people, and the majority of them own small businesses and suffering from the influence of covid19.
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OR >>> This country has a lot of self-employed individuals and majority of them own small businesses and is suffering from the impact of Covid19.
The level should be raised in consideration of support or even preparedness for them.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> The level of strict protocols must be raised with proper consideration of support and getting these people ready.
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