What is your opinion about violence on TV, movies, and video games?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I think it\'s bad.
Because most children can see and learn about violence.
And if they don\'t recognize it is bad, they will commit it to others.
So, I think children should not watch TV about violence.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Because most children can see and learn about violence.
And if they don\'t recognize it is bad, they will commit it to others.
So, I think children should not watch TV about violence.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Of course I think it\'s bad.
>> CORRECT!
Because most children can see and learn about violence.
>> CORRECT!
And if they don\'t recognize it is bad, they will commit it to others.
>> And if they don\'t recognize that it\'s bad, they will do it to others.
So, I think children should not watch TV about violence.
>> So, I think children should not watch violent shows on TV.
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