What is your opinion about your mom having a boyfriend?
학생이 쓴 원문
Mom's life is only grown up me and brother
She didn't live hers
As a woman who did not love my dad.
Due boyfriend happy and she receive love as a woman find themselves becoming more and more a life.
So I want you mom remarried.
Mother as a woman before it is hope to live a happy life.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear~~
That is very sweet of you to wish all the happiness for your mom!
Perhaps she\'s cry if she\'d read this from you!
You are lucky with your mom, the same way as she is to you and your brother!
Let\'s all find our happiness in life!
T.Kristel-
Mom\'s life is only grown up me and brother
>> My mom\'s life has been always about raising me and my brother.She didn\'t live hers
>> CORRECT!!As a woman who did not love my dad.
>> As a woman, she wasn\'t loved by my dad.Due boyfriend happy and she receive love as a woman find themselves becoming more and more a life.
>> Because of her boyfriend, she\'s now happy receiving love and she has already found more meaning into her life.So I want you mom remarried.
>> That\'s why I want my mom to re-marry.Mother as a woman before it is hope to live a happy life.
>> I want my mother to live as a woman and live a happy life.
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