What is your opinion of gender equality?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hello there! This is [Name].
Didn\'t you yet see \"Frozen 2\"?
If you don\'t hurry see movie, I\'ll tell you \"Frozen 2\" story
I\'m just joking.
At last today \"Frozen 2\" has been viewed 5 million people In South Korea.
Homework: What is your opinion of gender equality?
I know a male-dominated society in Korean history of the past.
But times are changing.
human must be think outside the box.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! I haven\'t watched Frozen II yet. Maybe one of these days. I haven\'t decided the day yet.
I laugh so loud here while I was reading your homework.
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>Didn\'t you watch Frozen 2 yet?
If you don\'t hurry see movie, I\'ll tell you \"Frozen 2\" story
>>If you don\'t hurry to see the movie, I\'ll tell you Frozen II\'s story.
I\'m just joking.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'m just kidding.
At last today \"Frozen 2\" has been viewed y 5 million people In South Korea.
>>On the last day, Frozen II was viewed by 5 million people in South Korea.
I know a male-dominated society in Korean history of the past.
>>I know that Korea was a male dominated society in the past according to the history.
But times are changing.
>>But the time is changing.
OR>>But the time has changed.
human must be think outside the box.
>>Human must think outside the box.
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