What is your opinion on making friends?
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Making buddies gives me lots of benefits in different parts. In travel, I can save traveling expenses by splitting bills with my friend, and it makes me feel funnier than going alone. In a company, If I have friends in other departments, I can easily ask for help in something to need collaboration with someone in different parts. And last, when I need advice or get stressed, I call one of m friends and sometimes we hang out so I can get a useful tip to figure out my problem or release my stress by laughing. So making friends is important to me for these reasons.
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Making buddies gives me lots of benefits in different parts.
>> Befriending people gives me a number of benefits in so many ways.
In travel, I can save traveling expenses by splitting bills with my friend, and it makes me feel funnier than going alone.
>> When traveling, I can save travel expenses by splitting bills with my friend, and it\'s much more fun going on trips with friends than going on solo holidays.
In a company, If I have friends in other departments, I can easily ask for help in something to need collaboration with someone in different parts.
>> Work-wise, having friends would make my job easier as collaborating or asking for assistance won\'t be an issue.
And last, when I need advice or get stressed, I call one of m friends and sometimes we hang out so I can get a useful tip to figure out my problem or release my stress by laughing.
>> Last, friends, especially bosom buddies are good shock absorbers or outlets when I\'m stressed out, under pressure, or just need some advice.
So making friends is important to me for these reasons.
>> correct
>> or: These are just some of the reasons why I befriend others.
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