What is your opinion on the importance of learning a second language? Do you think it should be mand

2024-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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I don\'t know that the importance of learning a second language. because I had never used it in real life. but it is essential if i live abroad. so i think it should not be mandatory in school.

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Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I don\'t know that the importance of learning a second language. because I had never used it in real life.
>> 
I didn\'t realize the importance of learning a second language because I had never used it in real life.

 but it is essential if i live abroad. so i think it should not be mandatory in school.
>> However, it becomes essential if I live abroad, so I think it should not be mandatory in school.

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