What is your own definition of \"beauty\"?
학생이 쓴 원문
The definition of beauty varies by countries, gender and personal preference. In my case, having a warm mind is much better than a physical appearance. I have seen a research about which part of bodies do men see when they meet or see women. The result was really interesting to me that breast is the first part of bodies men stair and second is the face. I can\'t deny to this result of research, because I think that I would like to check and see how woman look like as well. But I don\'t think that I check the chest part. As a excuse, the behavior men do is nature, so men can\'t control them by their reason. Anyway, I think that the most important thinks when we would like to chose our partner is the personality. We all know that money is nothing, but we would like to concern about how much assets our partner has and how much possibility they have in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! How are you? Thanks for answering the question in this homework.
Thanks for sharing your opinions. Women also have the same perspectives when looking at men.
I also can\'t deny the fact that when I see a man for the first time, first thing for me to notice is the face.
Maybe I am just lucky to meet my husband. I think that he has all the things that I look for a man.
But other than that, we have to be contented and appreciate everything our partner has. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
The definition of beauty varies by countries, gender and personal preference.In my case, having a warm mind is much better than a physical appearance.
I have seen a research about which part of bodies do men see when they meet or see women.
>> CORRECT
The result was really interesting to me that breast is the first part of bodies men stair and second is the face.
>> The result was really interesting for me to know that breast is the first part of a body men do STARE and second is the face.
I can\'t deny to this result of research, because I think that I would like to check and see how woman look like as well.
>> I can\'t deny to the result of this research because I also check and see how woman look as well.
But I don\'t think that I check the chest part.
>> CORRECT
As a excuse, the behavior men do is nature, so men can\'t control them by their reason.
>> As an excuse, this men\'s behavior is actually natural so it\'s hard for them to control it.
Anyway, I think that the most important thinks when we would like to chose our partner is the personality.
>> Anyway, I think that the most important THING to consider when choosing a partner is the personality.
We all know that money is nothing, but we would like to concern about how much assets our partner has and how much possibility they have in the future.
>> We all know that money is nothing, but we also have to be aware of the ASSETS our partners HAVE and if they are really meant for us in the future.
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