What is your paradise?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing your desire to visit Australia. I know that you will enjoy the place. And i also hope that you could really go there. Good luck to you and have a happy day!!!
Though I have never been there, My paradise is Austrailia.
>>correct!
>> Although I have never visited Australia, I consider it as my paradise.
Since I like being in nature,
>> Since I am a nature lover.
>> Since I love nature.
Austailia will be perfect place for me.
>> Australia will be a perfect place for me.
Fishing in the sea, trekking on desert or forest and
meeting Kangaroos
>> I would love to go fishing, trekking in the forest or desert. I also want to see kangaroos.
Many things are enough to satisfy myself.
>>correct!
>> There are many things that I can do there to satisfy myself.
Some of my friends visited there , and they told me it was great.
>.correct!
>> Some of my friends who visited Australia told me that it is a great place.
If I have any chane , I will visit there.
>>* chance
>> If I have any chance, I will go there.
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