What is your perception of time now? Does it go by slowly or quickly? What does this depend on?

2024-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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Time passes with equal speed. I feel differently how time goes by. When I was a child, a day was longer than now. Because I could remember everything what happened the day. But now, I can\'t remeber everything. Thesedays I can\'t remeber what I ate for lunch. Sometimes my daugther asked me what did I eat for the lunch. I couldn\'t answer. Some scientists said time goes by how much we can remeber. If you want to make time slow down, you try doing new activites.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]ny!

Good to hear from you. I think time passes differently from when we\'re happy and sad. I have also read somewhere that “Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted time.” So, as far as you enjoy what you do, it is quality time.

~ Trixia


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Time passes with equal speed.

- CORRECT.

I feel differently how time goes by.

- I feel differently as time goes by.

When I was a child, a day was longer than now.

- When I was a child, a day was longer than it is now.

Because I could remember everything what happened the day.

- I could remember everything that happened that day.

But now, I can\'t remeber everything.

- But now, I can\'t remember everything.

Thesedays I can\'t remeber what I ate for lunch.

- These days, I can\'t remember what I ate for lunch.

Sometimes my daugther asked me what did I eat for the lunch.

- Sometimes my daughter asks me what I eat for lunch.

I couldn\'t answer.

- CORRECT.

Some scientists said time goes by how much we can remeber.

- Some scientists said time goes by and how much we can remember.

If you want to make time slow down, you try doing new activites.

- If you want to make time slow down, try doing new activities.

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