What is your perception of time now? Does it go by slowly or quickly? What does this depend on?
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Hi, [이름]ny!
Good to hear from you. I think time passes differently from when we\'re happy and sad. I have also read somewhere that “Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted time.” So, as far as you enjoy what you do, it is quality time.
~ Trixia
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Time passes with equal speed.
- CORRECT.
I feel differently how time goes by.
- I feel differently as time goes by.
When I was a child, a day was longer than now.
- When I was a child, a day was longer than it is now.
Because I could remember everything what happened the day.
- I could remember everything that happened that day.
But now, I can\'t remeber everything.
- But now, I can\'t remember everything.
Thesedays I can\'t remeber what I ate for lunch.
- These days, I can\'t remember what I ate for lunch.
Sometimes my daugther asked me what did I eat for the lunch.
- Sometimes my daughter asks me what I eat for lunch.
I couldn\'t answer.
- CORRECT.
Some scientists said time goes by how much we can remeber.
- Some scientists said time goes by and how much we can remember.
If you want to make time slow down, you try doing new activites.
- If you want to make time slow down, try doing new activities.
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