What is your personal view about the issues concerning your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, in terms of North Korea, I do not want to get reunified unless we conquer them completely.
Secondly, in terms of China, I want President Moon to reject to import Huawei products.
Lastly, with regard to the US, we should be friendly to Trump.
I have a little tendency to favor the right wing.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Nice to hear from you again. You have good points in this homework.
Keep it up! You\'re improving a lot.
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie
What is your personal view about the issues concerning your country?
First, in terms of North Korea, I do not want to get reunified unless we conquer them completely.
>>First, in terms of North Korea, I do not want to get reunified to them unless we conquer them completely.
Secondly, in terms of China, I want President Moon to reject to import Huawei products.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Secondly, in terms of China, I want President Moon to reject the importation of Huawei products.
Lastly, with regard to the US, we should be friendly to Trump.
I have a little tendency to favor the right wing.
>>CORRECT
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