What is your philosophy in life?

2024-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

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A lot of things have been my life philosophy, but it depends on the situation. But now, my philosophy in life is a combination of two sentences. \"Carpe diem, you don\'t be greedy and live.\" Carpe diem is a Latin word that means to live in the present faithfully and enjoy the present. There were many difficult and failed things while preparing for getting a job, so I am trying to get good results with Carpe diem as my motto. In addtion, I think it is the hardest thing for humans to do not to be greedy. I think bad situations happen because of greed, and I\'ve seen a lot of bad situations happen, so I decided not to be greedy and live according to my level.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!~

I hope your philosophy leads to pleasure and prosperity. ~

Chammy

A lot of things have been my life philosophy, but it depends on the situation.

But now, my philosophy in life is a combination of two sentences.

>> Correct
\"Carpe diem, you don\'t be greedy and live.\"

>> \"Carpe diem, don\'t be greedy and live.\"

Carpe diem is a Latin word that means to live in the present faithfully and enjoy the present.

>> Correct
There were many difficult and failed things while preparing for getting a job, so I am trying to get good results with Carpe diem as my motto.

>>There were many challenging and failed experiences when preparing for a career, so I am attempting to achieve positive results using Carpe diem as my mantra.

In addtion, I think it is the hardest thing for humans to do not to be greedy.

>>In addition, I think it is the hardest thing for humans to do not to be greedy.

I think bad situations happen because of greed, and I\'ve seen a lot of bad situations happen, so I decided not to be greedy and live according to my level.

>> Correct

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