What is your philosophy in life?
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ro!
This quote definitely explains everything about your journey and purpose in life. You elaborated this quote with the goals you aim to hit and the principles you live by. Let us practice further about this on our next class. Have a smooth sailing today!
~Teacher Eunice
The motto of my life is \"The journey is the reward.\"
>> Correct!
>> OR: My motto in life is \"The journey is the reward.\"
I think the experience is worth more than any other things in my life because I believe it not only can shape my worldview but also construct myself.
>> I think my experience is worth more than any other things in my life because I believe that it will not only shape my point of view, but also to improve myself.
>> OR: I think my experience is worth more than any other things in my life because I do believe that it will not only shape my point of view in life, but it can also help me improve myself in all aspects.
I\'m the type of person who always tries to grow continuously and I believe only the experience can make it.
>> I\'m the type of person who always tries to grow continuously and I believe that I can make it through experiences.
Therefore I have been filling my life with various experiences.
>> Therefore, I have been filling my life with various experiences.
That\'s the reason I think the journey itself could be the reward.
>> That\'s the reason why I think the journey itself could be the reward.
I can\'t deny that the result is important but the process is also important as well as it because the process can teach us a lot.
>> I can\'t deny that the result is important but the process is also important as well and it is because the process can teach us a lot.
>> OR: I can\'t deny that the result and the process are essential because it can teach us lessons to grow as a person.
With this philosophy I have been living until now, and I believe I can enjoy the meaning of the life better.
>> With this philosophy I have been living until now, I believe that I can enjoy the meaning of life better.
>> OR: I\'ve been applying this philosophy in my life and with that I can say that I appreciate more of life even better.
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