What is your plan for the weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am planning to study English especially reading for the Ielts.
Also I am thinking about extending my eyelashes at the beauty shop. ^^
And stay home, which serving three meals for my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Young Won!
This sounds like a very good plan. It is quite busy and meaningful.
Keep your sentences short and correct. Excellent job for this answer. See you in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct! Or: IELTS
Also I am thinking about extending my eyelashes at the beauty shop. ^^
>> Correct!
And stay home, which serving three meals for my family.
>> I would also like to stay home and serve 3 meals for my family.
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