What is your political forecast next year on your election?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I support a democratic government. Hense, I will give my right as an election. I hope to maintain this government next president election. Because if it would not be that , our political level will fall to its previous state.
강사 첨삭
Hi, good afternoon [이름]!
Your government is very lucky to have your support all the way. Most of the time, politics is polarizing. The important thing is after the elections, we put our actions together to uphold the developments that the leaders promised. This changes our lives for the better.
Thanks for this short and substantial composition. I will see you later in class!
Take care!
-T. Donna =)
>> Well, I support the democratic government.
Hense, I will give my right as an election.
>> Hence, I will give my right of suffrage in the elections.
I hope to maintain this government next president election.
>> I hope to maintain this government next presidential election.
Because if it would not be that , our political level will fall to its previous state.
>> Correct!
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