What is your proudest accomplishment so far this year?
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Happy Tuesday to you [이름]!
Congratulations! It is really good to reach your goal.
Don\'t rush things. I know you will be able to accomplish a lot of things this year.
Be positive.^^ It is important to have a goal and to work hard for it.
It takes time, determination and effort to achieve what you want.
We should not give up. See you.
Thanks again for doing your essay.
Teacher Nina
Accomplishments...
In this year, I think I didn\'t to anything.
>> I think I didn\'t do anything this year.
but, proudly I can told you that I do my best to adapt to my leader.
>> But I can proudly say to you that I did my best to get along with my leader.
>> OR: But I can proudly tell you that I did my best to adopt the qualities of my leader.
I think It is the best accomplishment so far.
>> I think it is the best accomplishment I had so far.
I want to set another goal. I didn\'t think it yet.
>> I want to set another goal but I haven\'t thought about it yet.
>> OR: I want to have another goal but I haven\'t thought about it yet.
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