What is your proudest accomplishment so far this year?

Good day Kim!

You are such a very nice sister and granddaughter. You always think about their welfare. I really hope that you will achieve all your dreams in life, so you can share your success with your sister and your grandmother.^^

~Kelly^^

It has not been a week since the New Year.

>> It has not been a week since the new year started.

So there are not many things that I am proud of.

>> Correct.

But I can choose this thing that I got a job as a my proudest accomplishment in this year. 

>> But I can choose the job that I got as my proudest accomplishment in this year. 
I had a hard time in last year.

>> I had a hard time last year.

Because it was not easy to get a job.

>> Correct.

When I became a 4th grade, I tought that I should have a occupation quickly for my younger sister and my grandmother.

>> When I became a 4th grade student, I thought that I should have an occupation quickly for my younger sister and my grandmother.

I always wish to give somethings that they want and travel together. 

>> I always wish to give some things that they want and travel together with them.  
So I know that because of this job, I must go to Australia and separate with my family.

>> So, I know that because of this job, I must go to Australia and be separated with my family.

But I make a plan that after I finished work, I will go abroad with them ,buy a meal and give a present.

>> But I have a plan that after I finished working, I will go abroad with them, buy them a meal and give them a present. 
Therefore, I should study English harder to prepare this position.

>> Therefore, I should study English harder to prepare for this position.

And I hope that end of this year, this experience be my best choice.

>> And I hope that at the end of this year, this experience will be my best choice.