What is your purpose in life?

It is definitely a difficult question specially to answer with a few sentences. When I look back my life, usually, there were not any specific purposes. I had done my missions that I had to do at that moment. It is rather to say that I exerted efforts to achieve goals formed by others expectations. Then, few years ago, in one boring day, I got a sudden idea that could catch a tiny tail of this answer. There are numerous intriguing things in the world, even they are changing every time. I hope to learn them and I wish that I am able to do this as long as I can. I cannot finalize it as a final goal, but I can drive toward a lot of treasures and achieve them in the future, if I am on a strong and fast ship. So, I decided to build it, at first, and I think the one is to study English and the another is to be healthier. Therefore, at this moment, I live for rising my abilities which are helpful to make better future.

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What is your purpose in life?

It is definitely a difficult question specially to answer with a few sentences.

>>It is definitely a difficult question, especially if the answer contains just a few sentences.

When I look back my life, usually, there were not any specific purposes.

>>When I look back at my life, usually, I cannot see any specific purpose.

I had done my missions that I had to do at that moment.

>>I completed all of my missions that I had to do at that moment.

It is rather to say that I exerted efforts to achieve goals formed by others expectations.

>>I can rather say that I exerted efforts to achieve goals formed by others’ expectations.

Then, few years ago, in one boring day, I got a sudden idea that could catch a tiny tail of this answer.

>>Then, few years ago, in one boring day, I got a sudden idea that anyone can make heads or tails of it.

There are numerous intriguing things in the world, even they are changing every time.

>>There are numerous intriguing things in the world, they are even changing every moment.

I hope to learn them and I wish that I am able to do this as long as I can.

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or>>I hope that I will be able to learn these things for as long as I can.

I cannot finalize it as a final goal, but I can drive toward a lot of treasures and achieve them in the future, if I am on a strong and fast ship.

>>I cannot say it is my final goal, but I can go after a lot of treasures and achieve them in the future, if I am on a strong and fast ship.

So, I decided to build it, at first, and I think the one is to study English and the another is to be healthier.

>>So, I decided to build it first, and I think the first thing I need to do is to study English and the second is to stay healthy.

Therefore, at this moment, I live for rising my abilities which are helpful to make better future.

>>Therefore, at this moment, I will live to further increase my abilities, which are helpful in making my future better.