What is your reaction now that Yoon Seok-youl is the new president of South Korea? What do you think
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When I knew that Yoon Seok-youl became the new president, I was very surprised because I saw some people\'s opinions before the result is announced. Some people said \"Yoon Seok-youl is not enough to be the new president. So, I thought that people will vote Lee Jaemyeong instead of Yoon Seok-youl. However, the result was contrary. This is why I was surprised When I knew that Yoon Seok-youl became the new president. / In fact, I don\'t know what can he do for my country. Just, I hope that he does his best for Koreans. Please....
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Hi Kimberly!
Koreans have mixed emotions about this. Let\'s just hope that the elected president will do well during his term.
When I knew that Yoon Seok-youl became the new president, I was very surprised because I saw some people\'s opinions before the result is announced.
>> When I found out that Yoon Seok-youl became the new president, I was very surprised because I saw some people\'s opinions before the result was announced.
Some people said \"Yoon Seok-youl is not enough to be the new president.
>> CORRECT
So, I thought that people will vote Lee Jaemyeong instead of Yoon Seok-youl.
>> So, I thought that people will vote Lee Jaem-yeong instead of Yoon Seok-youl.
However, the result was contrary.
>> CORRECT
This is why I was surprised When I knew that Yoon Seok-youl became the new president. /
>> This is why I was surprised when I found out that Yoon Seok-Youl became the new president.
In fact, I don\'t know what can he do for my country.
>> CORRECT
Just, I hope that he does his best for Koreans. Please....
>> I just hope that he will do his best for the Koreans in our country.
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