What is your reaction now that Yoon Seok-youl is the new president of South Korea? What do you think

2022-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I was calm when I saw that Yoon Seok-youl became the president. Although he can\'t satisfy all the people, I hope he make a wise decision.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

Koreans have mixed emotions about this. Let\'s just hope that the elected president will do well during his term.

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I was calm when I saw that Yoon Seok-youl became the president.

>> CORRECT

Although he can\'t satisfy all the people, I hope he make a wise decision.

>> Although he can\'t satisfy all the people, I still hopes that he will make wise decisions for the country.

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