What is your reaction now that Yoon Seok-youl is the new president of South Korea? What do you think

2022-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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First of all, it was such an honor to participate in the presidential election for the first time. But I think I could never choose who would be good to be president. The reason is that when I always looked at the news, bad events related to the candidates were aired. So after Yoon was elected president, I think I admitted that it happened. It\'s hard to predict what kind of work he will help the people, but I expect him to help the people\'s lives as he becomes president. Also, I hope that the new chairman Yoon will do good and kind things as he has become a representative of Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jessica!

Koreans have mixed emotions about this. Let\'s just hope that the elected president will do well during his term.

PS: You are very good in expressing your thoughts and opinions. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

First of all, it was such an honor to participate in the presidential election for the first time.

>> CORRECT

But I think I could never choose who would be good to be president.

>> CORRECT

The reason is that when I always looked at the news, bad events related to the candidates were aired.

>> The reason is that when I always look at the news, bad events, related to the candidates, are aired.

So after Yoon was elected president, I think I admitted that it happened.

>> So after Yoon was elected as president, I think I have already accepted it.

It\'s hard to predict what kind of work he will help the people, but I expect him to help the people\'s lives as he becomes president.

>>It\'s hard to predict what kind of work he will do to help the people, but I expect him to help the people\'s lives as he becomes president.

Also, I hope that the new chairman Yoon will do good and kind things as he has become a representative of Korea.

>> Also, I hope that the new chairman, Yoon, will do good and kind things as he has become a representative of Korea.

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