What is your stand with the world\'s pandemic outbreak now?
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Recently everyday morning news announce the dead toll and the number of infections. And new informations of Uhan coronavirus are being updated everyday, because it is a new virus. As the situation is getting worse and worse , I think we have to protect ourselves. When we go out, we have to wear a mask and don\'t touch mouth, nose and eyes. When we get home, we have to wash hands and face clearly. There are the complicated relationships between countries, maybe we can\'t ban entering chinese during full pamdemic period. Therefore we have to be careful of ourselves.
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- Tricia
Recently everyday morning news announce the dead toll and the number of infections.
>> Recently everyday morning news announce the death toll and the number of infections.
And new informations of Uhan coronavirus are being updated everyday, because it is a new virus.
>> And new information about Wuhan corona-virus is being updated every day because it is a new virus.
As the situation is getting worse and worse , I think we have to protect ourselves.
>> As the situation is getting worse and worse, I think we have to protect ourselves.
When we go out, we have to wear a mask and don\'t touch mouth, nose and eyes.
>> When we go out, we have to wear a mask and don\'t touch the mouth, nose, and eyes.
When we get home, we have to wash hands and face clearly.
>> When we get home, we have to wash hands and face properly.
There are the complicated relationships between countries, maybe we can\'t ban entering chinese during full pamdemic period.
>> There are complicated relationships between countries, maybe we can\'t ban entering Chinese during full pandemic period.
Therefore we have to be careful of ourselves.
>> Therefore we have to take good care of ourselves.
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