What is your Strong point?

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I am a great team player.

>> Correct
I mostly worked in a team at my previous job and l like team environment.

>> I mostly worked in a team in my previous job and l like an environment of cooperation.
To give a good quality treatment to the patient, I usually work with the other part of person who are physicians and therapist, nutritionist and so on.

>> To give a good quality treatment to a patient, I usually work with other people like the physicians, therapists, nutritionists and others.

By sharing their knowledge and skills working can be more efficient and also I can learn many things from them.

>> By sharing their knowledge and skills, working can be more efficient and I can also learn many things from them.

And also I have a good relationship with them, they loved to worked with me.

>> I also maintain a good relationship with them and they love to work with me.
So if I become a cabin crew I can be a good team player.

>> If I become a member of a cabin crew, I can be a good team player.
I’ve been working as a nurse for 3 years and I have the ability to remain calm even under pressure and to be professional at all times.

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I have experience kind of CPR and emergency situation in many times.

>> I have experienced various kinds of CPR and emergency situations at different times.

So I can take charge of a situation during emergencies or unexpected situations that may happen during the flight.

>> I can take charge of a situation during emergencies or unexpected situations that may happen during the flight.