What is your take on spending for exorbitantly-priced weddings to show affluence?

2019-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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I guess that having a fancy wedding is the dream of all women. I believe that everybody would be envy, if they saw somebody who spend for exorbitantly-priced weddings. However, once we got married, we realized that we should not spend a lot of money for the wedding. It is more worth to spend money for another things like buying electronics or spending it for honeymoon. There are many example about spending money to show their affluence. I think that showing off person\'s affluence is human\'s natural desire. Most men would like to buy luxury car, if they can afford purchase it and most women want to luxury bags like Gucci, Chanel and Burberry. I have seen a fancy wedding in UAE, it was Indian wedding and they rented whole facility of golf club. I heard that they might paid 300,000 dollars for their wedding. They invited famous singer from their country, and provide luxury meal to the guests. I thought I would have a same wedding, if I had a chance.

강사 첨삭

On point, Sir [이름]!

People can spend lavishly for their weddings only to realize how such a wasteful party it is. Thanks for the explicit answer, it was excellent!

~Teacher Eunice


I guess that having a fancy wedding is the dream of all women. 

>>> I guess that having a fancy wedding is a dream for all women. 

I believe that everybody would be envy, if they saw somebody who spend for exorbitantly-priced weddings.

>>> I believe that everybody would be envy if they saw somebody who spent for an exorbitantly-priced wedding.  

However, once we got married, we realized that we should not spend a lot of money for the wedding. 

>>> correct!

It is more worth to spend money for another things like buying electronics or spending it for honeymoon.

>>> It is more worth to spend money for other things like buying electronics, or spending it for honeymoon.

There are many example about spending money to show their affluence.

>>> There are many examples about spending money to show affluence.

I think that showing off person\'s affluence is human\'s natural desire.

>>> I think that showing off a person\'s affluence is humans\' natural desire.

>>> OR:  I think showing off affluence is humans\' nature. 

Most men would like to buy luxury car, if they can afford purchase it and most women want to luxury bags like Gucci, Chanel and Burberry. 

>>> Most men would like to buy luxury cars if they can afford to purchase it, and most women want to buy luxury bags like Gucci, Chanel and Burberry. 

I have seen a fancy wedding in UAE, it was Indian wedding and they rented whole facility of golf club.

>>> I have seen a fancy wedding in the UAE, it was an Indian wedding, and they rented the whole facility of the golf club.  

I heard that they might paid 300,000 dollars for their wedding.

>>> I heard that they paid $300,000 for their wedding.

They invited famous singer from their country, and provide luxury meal to the guests.

>>> They invited famous singers from their country, and provided a luxurious meal to the guests.

I thought I would have a same wedding, if I had a chance.

>>> I thought of having the same wedding, if I had a chance.

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