What is your taste in music? Has it changed in time? Would you recommend it to someone?
학생이 쓴 원문
Until last year, my taste christmas music was exciting music. The musics made me feel good. But nowadays, I listened to the jazz christmas musics. Especially, I heard the vintage jazz. I feel the old mood is very warm. So I like it. I always search ‘the vintage jazz christmas music’ on Youtube. Then there are very many kind of music playlists. It is very helpful to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. Your taste in Christmas music is interesting and classic. It brings me back to the old Christmas songs of the 90\'s.^^ I am glad you enjoy that kind of music. And I appreciate you doing your homework. Keep it up. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Until last year, my taste christmas music was exciting music.
>> Until last year, my taste in Christmas music was upbeat.
The musics made me feel good.
>> That kind of sound made me feel good.
But nowadays, I listened to the jazz christmas musics.
>> But nowadays, I listen to jazz Christmas music.
Especially, I heard the vintage jazz.
>> Especially, when I hear vintage jazz.
I feel the old mood is very warm.
>> CORRECT =)
So I like it.
>> CORRECT =)
I always search ‘the vintage jazz christmas music’ on Youtube.
>> CORRECT =)
Then there are very many kind of music playlists.
>> CORRECT =)
It is very helpful to me.
>> It is very helpful for me.
Until last year, my taste christmas music was exciting music.
>> Until last year, my taste in Christmas music was upbeat.
The musics made me feel good.
>> That kind of sound made me feel good.
But nowadays, I listened to the jazz christmas musics.
>> But nowadays, I listen to jazz Christmas music.
Especially, I heard the vintage jazz.
>> Especially, when I hear vintage jazz.
I feel the old mood is very warm.
>> CORRECT =)
So I like it.
>> CORRECT =)
I always search ‘the vintage jazz christmas music’ on Youtube.
>> CORRECT =)
Then there are very many kind of music playlists.
>> CORRECT =)
It is very helpful to me.
>> It is very helpful for me.
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