What is your thought about a four-day workweek?
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I prefer a four-days of work. Because, Not only length of time but also quality is important .
Also people will spend money while they have a free time, the economy would become more active.
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I prefer a four-days of work. Because, Not only length of time but also quality is important .
>>> I prefer a four-days of work because, not only the length of time but also the quality is important .
Also people will spend money while they have a free time, the economy would become more active.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Also, people tend to spend more while enjoying their free time, this boosts the economy.
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