What is your view of the idea that to apologize shows a sign of weakness

2015-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I disagree that the apology shows a sign of weakness. Approval about my mistake and give the apology properly is very brave action. People easily hide their mistakes, but it is sometimes this action will wound a person's heart. For example, I have a story. Last week CEO asked me to take a project, So I said "Yes". But today, they change their mind without any notice. They must have to say their decision to me first. But they didn't say anything. They think this is nothing. But I totally lose the trust about my company. They did this kind of thing very often without apology. The apology is not the sign of the weakness. If they think that the apology is to approve their mistakes, they will lose reliability just like as me. Apologizing the right time right word is the basic of expectations and communication. It doesn't mean showing a weakness, but showing the respect about the other person.

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A great Tuesday to you [이름]! (^^,) How\'s your day going so far? The topic in our composition board is really interesting. First and foremost, what is an apology? An apology is an admission that you’ve wronged others and that you are actually sorry for it. This is actually the reason why many of us find it difficult to apologize. No one likes to admit they are wrong or they screwed up because no one likes the complicated, defeated feelings that go along with it.  No one likes to go to other people, publicly or privately, and admit to them that they’ve been wrong. It is, literally, humiliating, since apologizing almost always requires humility and a willingness to put the needs of those you have wronged over your own. Humans are ego-bound creatures, that\'s why apologizing is a very hard thing to do. I honestly think that the ability to admit that you are wrong over something and apologizing for it are very brave actions. It requires great humility to do such thing and it\'s not easy that\'s why I admire those people who are capable of doing it. To tell you the truth, I admire and respect those people more because they know that they are not perfect and they are bound to commit mistakes at times. Thank you for this composition [이름]. I\'ve realized a lot of things today. I was reminded that pride and ego could ruin a peson. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry (^^,) I disagree that the apology shows a sign of weakness. >> I disagree that giving out an apology shows a sign of weakness.Approval about my mistake and give the apology properly is very brave action. >> Admitting my mistake and giving out a proper apology are very brave actions.People easily hide their mistakes, but it is sometimes this action will wound a person\'s heart. >> People could easily hide their mistakes, but sometimes this action could wound a person\'s heart. For example, I have a story. >> CORRECT! OR >> I would like to site a story as an example. Last week CEO asked me to take a project, So I said \"Yes\". >> Last week, our CEO asked me to take a project, so I said \"Yes\". But today, they change their mind without any notice. >> But today, they changed their minds without any prior notice. They must have to say their decision to me first. >> They should tell me about their decision first. But they didn\'t say anything. >> CORRECT! OR >> But they didn\'t inform me about it. They think this is nothing. >> CORRECT! OR >> They think its not a big deal.  But I totally lose the trust about my company. >> I totally lost my trust to my company. They did this kind of thing very often without apology. >> They do this kind of thing very often without giving out an apology. The apology is not the sign of the weakness. >> Apologizing is not a sign of weakness. If they think that the apology is to approve their mistakes, they will lose reliability just like as me. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: If they think apologizing will make them look weak, they will lose their credibility to other people later on just like what happened to me. Apologizing the right time right word is the basic of expectations and communication. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Apologizing at the right time with the right words is part of maintaining a good relationship with other people. It doesn\'t mean showing a weakness, but showing the respect about the other person. >> It doesn\'t mean that you are weak, but rather shows that you respect the other person you\'ve offended.

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