What is your view on the idea that there is no "I" in a team?

2015-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think that there is no "I" in a team means that we are in harmony with a team member. If we strongly insist about myself, that is not the team. That is just a group for oneself such as bodyguard. Sometimes the team move for only one person. But in that case, that is not exactly mean for one person but They move to one goal. If I insist myself in the team, the team members don't like me and they think I'm a very selfish person. Most of all, the teamwork is getting weak. To achieve the team goal, we have to be in harmony with others.

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Hi, [이름]! (^^,) I think you\'re right when you said in order for a team to work out well, there should be harmonious relationship among its member. However, there\'s a thin line betweeng harmony and chaos. Sometimes, a member in a team keeps his mouth shut even if his opinion or suggestion is very good because he does not want to mess up with that \"harmony\". In every team, there\'s always a member (members) with strong opinions and a member (members ) who quietly follows the crowd. Sometimes, these quiet people have the tendency to get abused. I agree that team work is very important and it\'s more fulfilling when you win and feel accomplished along with the other members of the team. However, there should be balance and synchronicity inside the team to truly achieve a harmonious relationship I hope you are having a wonderful day [이름]. ^^ See you again tomorrow. Take care always. ~Teacher Charry (^_^)/ I think that there is no \"I\" in a team means that we are in harmony with a team member. >> I think the phrase: \"there is no \'I\' in a team\", means that we have to maintain a harmonious relationship with the other team members. If we strongly insist about myself, that is not the team. >> If we strongly insist that we could work alone even if we are in a team, then it is not considered as a team. That is just a group for oneself such as bodyguard. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Working alone is not a team, like in the case of a bodyguard. Sometimes the team move for only one person. >> Sometimes the team only follows one person. But in that case, that is not exactly mean for one person but They move to one goal. >> But in that case, it does not exactly mean that the group only works because of one person but rather because of one goal. If I insist myself in the team, the team members don\'t like me and they think I\'m a very selfish person. >> If I insist on what I want in my team, the other team members will dislike me and would think that I\'m a very selfish person. Most of all, the teamwork is getting weak. >> Most of all, the team work will diminish. To achieve the team goal, we have to be in harmony with others. >> To achieve the team\'s goal, we have to be in harmony with others.

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