What is your weakness? How will you make it strong? Answer in a few sentences.

2022-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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My weakness is seminarophobia which is known as stage fright. Whenever I stand in front of a crowd, my mind goes blank. So, I need to prepare and memorize a whole script to speak perfectly.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Judy!

Your weakness is my strength but I must say, this is one weakness that all of us have or had depending on hope well we cope with the situation. I hope that you will find it easy and comfortable speaking in front of many people. It is  an opportunity to say your thoughts about something. This needs a lot of practice. Thus, always practice with me in class.

Excellent job here on your homework answer in terms of grammar and meaning. Keep it up!

-T. Donna~

My weakness is seminarophobia which is known as stage fright. 
>> Correct!

Whenever I stand in front of a crowd, my mind goes blank. 
>> Correct!

So, I need to prepare and memorize a whole script to speak perfectly.
>> Correct!
Or: So, I need to prepare and memorize the whole script to speak perfectly.

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