What is your weakness that hinders you from accomplishing your goals?
학생이 쓴 원문
The worst hinder is my age. There is words, a boy is easy to be old, it is very difficult to achieve learning. I have been a software engineer for eighteen years. When I was a fresh man, I was easy to make an algorithm. I could understand new technologies. But now, I can\'t make an algorithm as fast as before. New technologies are so complicated. So, It isn\'t easy to understand in short time. That\'s why. I want to make a team. Working alone has limitation. If I work alone, it is impossible to catch up the rate of technological change. And, I try to keep being healthy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]ny!
Having a team would be a huge help to you. I hope you get one soon. Also, being healthy is the most important. We have to be physically and mentally healthy to achieve all our goals. Good luck in your endeavors!
~ Trixia
Content:
The worst hinder is my age.
- The worst hindrance is my age.
There is words, a boy is easy to be old, it is very difficult to achieve learning.
- There is a quote: A boy is easy to be old; it is very difficult to achieve learning.
I have been a software engineer for eighteen years.
- CORRECT.
When I was a fresh man, I was easy to make an algorithm.
- As a young man, it was easy to make an algorithm.
I could understand new technologies.
- CORRECT.
But now, I can\'t make an algorithm as fast as before.
- CORRECT.
New technologies are so complicated.
- CORRECT.
So, It isn\'t easy to understand in short time.
- So, it isn\'t easy to understand in a short time.
That\'s why. I want to make a team.
- That\'s why I want to make a team.
Working alone has limitation.
- Working alone has limitations.
If I work alone, it is impossible to catch up the rate of technological change.
- If I work alone, it is impossible to catch up with the rate of technological change.
And, I try to keep being healthy.
- And I try to keep being healthy.
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