What is your worst experience in life that you can\'t forget?

2022-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When I worked as soldier, I was on night duty, and I was joking with my senior that I saw a ghost, and I remembered the troops going crazy because it happened to be North Korea\'s provocation. Now that I think about it, I\'ll never forget it because it\'s fun. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic! 

HAHAHAHAHA! I laughed very hard when I read your answer. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon. 

When I worked as soldier, I was on night duty, and I was joking with my senior that I saw a ghost, and I remembered the troops going crazy because it happened to be North Korea\'s provocation.
>> When I worked as a soldier, I was on night duty and I was joking with my senior that I saw a ghost. I remembered the troops were going crazy because it happened to be North Korea\'s provocation.

Now that I think about it, I\'ll never forget it because it\'s fun. 
>> CORRECT

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