What is your worst experience in life that you can\'t forget? Explain in detail.
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When I was an university student, I had a big fight with my friend. That’s because she felt alone since I made my first boyfriend. Although I tried to spend more time with her, she was kind of a jealous. She gossiped behind my back and I realized it afterward through other friends. I was so angry about her on that time. She didn’t feel sorry to me and I didn’t want to forgive her. We didn’t talk each other anymore after the fight. It was affected my university life a lot. For instance, I had to make other friends because of her. I got through a tough time during my university life. I couldn’t still forget the worst experience. I don’t want to get through one more time in my life. It was the most terrible experience that I\'ve ever had.
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Hi [이름]!
Oh, that\'s so unfortunate. I think your friend was very immature during that time. Gossiping is never a good thing. :(
When I was an university student, I had a big fight with my friend.
>> When I was a university student, I had a big fight with my friend.
That’s because she felt alone since I made my first boyfriend.
>> That’s because she felt alone since I had my first boyfriend.
Although I tried to spend more time with her, she was kind of a jealous.
>> Although I tried to spend more time with her, she was still kind of jealous.
She gossiped behind my back and I realized it afterward through other friends.
>> She gossiped behind my back and I realized it afterwards through other friends.
I was so angry about her on that time.
>> I was so angry at her that time.
She didn’t feel sorry to me and I didn’t want to forgive her.
>> She didn’t feel sorry for me and I didn’t want to forgive her.
We didn’t talk each other anymore after the fight.
>> We didn’t talk to each other anymore after the fight.
It was affected my university life a lot.
>> It affected my university life a lot.
For instance, I had to make other friends because of her.
>> CORRECT
I got through a tough time during my university life.
>> I went through a tough time during my university life.
I couldn’t still forget the worst experience.
>> I still couldn\'t forget that experience.
I don’t want to get through one more time in my life.
>> I don\'t want to go through that one more time in my life.
It was the most terrible experience that I\'ve ever had.
>> CORRECT
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