What is your worst experience in life that you can\'t forget? Explain in detail.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a cousin.
I am 15 years old, and my cousin too (Korean age).
When I was young, I had lived in Philippines for 2 years, and at that time, I thought that I am order than my cousin.
Because I am older than him as international age, and I was living in Philippines.
But I noticed that I am same age with my cousin as Korean age when I came back to Korea.
And I was too young, so I cried all days because of that.
But now, I\'m okay.
But it is worst and most memorable experience that I\'ve ever had.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I have a cousin.
>> CORRECT
I am 15 years old, and my cousin too (Korean age).
>> We are both 15 years old in Korean age.
When I was young, I had lived in Philippines for 2 years, and at that time, I thought that I am order than my cousin.
>> When I was young, I lived in Philippines for 2 years. At that time, I thought that I was older than my cousin.
Because I am older than him as international age, and I was living in Philippines.
>> It is because I am older than him in international age since I was living in Philippines.
But I noticed that I am same age with my cousin as Korean age when I came back to Korea.
>> But then I noticed that I am same age with my cousin when I went back to South Korea.
And I was too young, so I cried all days because of that.
>> I cried a lot because of that.
But now, I\'m okay.
>> But now, I\'m okay with it.
But it is worst and most memorable experience that I\'ve ever had.
>> It is the worst and most memorable experience that I\'ve ever had.
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