What is your zombie apocalypse plan?
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If a zombie appear, I would disappear into the house.
Going out should decrease.
I also would buy some weapons and metal armor like a knights in middle ages.
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Hi [이름]!
Going out should decrease.
I also would buy some weapons and metal armor like a knights in middle ages.
Zombie apocalypse is scary.
AS a weak person, I might not survive. :)
Thank you for sending your homework!
Andrea
If a zombie appear, I would disappear into the house.
>> If a zombie appears, I would hide inside the house.
Going out should decrease.
>> We should go out less.
I also would buy some weapons and metal armor like a knights in middle ages.
>> I also would buy some weapons and metal armor like knights in the middle ages.
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