What item do you love to shop?
학생이 쓴 원문
I do like to buy clothes including upper garments, pants, and shoes through online shop, so my expenditure from monthly pocket money is about 200 thousand for each season.
강사 첨삭
Hello Judy! How\'s Chuseok?
Well, I think that you are spending at an average rate. The budget is not too bad at all. Thank you for answering my question. I am sure that you are so busy studying your lessons this Tuesday.
See you on Friday, take care always.^^
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: I like to buy clothes including upper garments, pants, and shoes through online shops so my expenditure from my monthly pocket money is about 200 thousand Won for each season.
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