What job did you want when you were younger?
학생이 쓴 원문
I wanted to be a chef. I do like cooking! I have a good sense of smell. So I could know what ingredient is into the food. And I think chef is cool when I was watched them to TV. So when I was young, I wanted to be a chef.
강사 첨삭
I wanted to be a chef. I do like cooking!
>> CORRECT
I have a good sense of smell.
>> CORRECT
So I could know what ingredient is into the food.
>> So, I could know what ingredient is in the food.
And I think chef is cool when I was watched them to TV.
>> And I think chefs are cool when I watched them to TV.
So when I was young, I wanted to be a chef.
>> CORRECT
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