What job do you think is cool?
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I think the composer is a cool job. The reason why I think like this is because I guess making music is very creative work and it is also interesting. Additionally, a song writer can make lots of money especially enjoying their work. I like to listen to music and arrange and write music. In fact a week ago I’ve started composing and it was super exciting. Now I‘m just a beginner but hopefully I write different kinds of great songs from now on.
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I think the composer is a cool job. The reason why I think like this is
because I guess making music is very creative work and it is also
interesting. Additionally, a song writer can make lots of money
especially enjoying their work. I like to listen to music and arrange
and write music. In fact a week ago I’ve started composing and it was
super exciting. Now I‘m just a beginner but hopefully I write different
kinds of great songs from now on.
>> I think a composer is a cool job. The reason why I think I like this is
because composing music is a very creative work and it is also
interesting. Additionally, a song writer can make lots of money
and enjoy their work. I like to listen to music and arrange
and write music. In fact a week ago I’ve started composing and it was
super exciting. Now I‘m just a beginner but hopefully I write different
kinds of great songs from now on.
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