What job do you want in the futere?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to cook and play baseball and docter.
First cook is I want to cook many foods.
And playing baseball is I want to play the baseball.
And docter is helping sick people is good.
These jobs are I want to do in the futere.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Good job on your homework! Keep it up!
T. DON
I want to cook and play baseball and docter.
First cook is I want to cook many foods.
And playing baseball is I want to play the baseball.
And docter is helping sick people is good.
These jobs are I want to do in the futere.
First cook is I want to cook many foods.
And playing baseball is I want to play the baseball.
And docter is helping sick people is good.
These jobs are I want to do in the futere.
>> I want to be a chef and play baseball and become a doctor. First, I want to become a chef because I want to cook many foods. Secondly, I also want to be a professional baseball player because I want to play baseball. And lastly, I want to become a doctor because I want to help sick people . These jobs are what I want to do in the future.
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