What job do you want in the future
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I want to be a quantum physicist in the future. I am very interested in dimensional movement. If I were invent a dimensionally mobile device, I would win a Nobel Prize. And I could see another myself as moving to another dimension. I also want to invent a time travel device. It would be amazing.
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Happy Tuesday! See you in our class ^^
T.DON
I want to be a quantum physicist in the future. I am very interested in
dimensional movement. If I were invent a dimensionally mobile device, I
would win a Nobel Prize. And I could see another myself as moving to
another dimension. I also want to invent a time travel device. It would
be amazing.
>> I want to be a quantum physicist in the future. I am very interested in
dimensional movement. If I were to invent a dimensionally mobile device, I
would win a Nobel Prize. And I could see myself moving to
another dimension. I also want to invent time traveling device. It would
be amazing.
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