What jobs do you think are dangerous?
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I think the army, firefigter is dangerous job.
Like war, maybe I can die.
And Firefighter is the fire is so big and in the fire is in the person,
It will die or not die.
These reasons are the dangerous jobs.
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I think the army, firefigter is dangerous job.
>> I think working in the army and firefighting are dangerous jobs.
Like war, maybe I can die.
>> If I am a soldier and I join the war, maybe I can die.
And Firefighter is the fire is so big and in the fire is in the person,
It will die or not die.
It will die or not die.
>> And as for firefighters, it\'s difficult to save someone if the fire is so big.
These reasons are the dangerous jobs.
>> These are the reasons working in the army and firefighting are dangerous jobs.
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