What K-pop song would you like to recommend to a non-K-pop fan?
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There are lots of K-pop artists and songs. But if I recommend, I will choose the (G) - idle\'s . because I never wouldn\'t be able to forget the first time when I saw the show . I have seen the show in the Queendom. is Korean\'s entertainment program on 2019. was final show in . They not only appeared to make up as queen but also wore fascinating dress too. As I think, would be so interest even if we can\'t realize music\'s true meaning. Because the show was fancy and magnificent. Soyean who composed the music said, \'s topic is growth. I want other people to feel the impression I received about . So, is one of my favorite songs. Thank you.
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There are lots of K-pop artists and songs.
>> CORRECT!But if I recommend, I will choose the (G) - idle\'s .
>> CORRECT!because I never wouldn\'t be able to forget the first time when I saw the show.
>> That\'s because I never wouldn\'t be able to forget the first time when I saw the show.
I have seen the show in the Queendom.
>> CORRECT!is Korean\'s entertainment program on 2019. was final show in .
>> It\'s a Korean entertainment program in 2019, and that\'s the final show they were in.
They not only appeared to make up as queen but also wore fascinating dress too.
>> CORRECT!They not only appeared to make up as queen but also wore fascinating dress too.
As I think, would be so interest even if we can\'t realize music\'s true meaning.
>> As I think, it is so interesting even if we can\'t realize music\'s true meaning.
Because the show was fancy and magnificent.
>> It\'s because the show was fancy and magnificent. So[이름] who composed the music said, \'s topic is growth.
>> So[이름], who composed the music said that the topic is \"growth\".
I want other people to feel the impression I received about .
>> I want other people to feel the impression I received.
So, is one of my favorite songs. Thank you.
>> So, that is one of my favorite songs. Thank you.
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