What keeps you busy during a long trip?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I travel, I plan to see a lot of things. I try to visit lots of hot places in the city and eat famous local food.
Some day, I departed at 7:00 AM and I have been returned to hotel at 11:00 PM.
I think that I busily spend time because I want to experience a lot of things during a trip.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [이름]! I am glad that you answered your homework. Thank you for being participative all the time. See you in our class. Have a wonderful day! :)
- Teacher Sophia
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Some day, I departed at 7:00 AM and I have been returned to hotel at 11:00 PM.
Some day, I departed at 7:00 AM and I have been returned to hotel at 11:00 PM.
>> Some days, I depart at 7:00 AM and I return to the hotel at 11:00 PM.
I think that I busily spend time because I want to experience a lot of things during a trip.
I think that I busily spend time because I want to experience a lot of things during a trip.
>> I think that I will be busy while spending some time alone because I want to experience a lot of things during the trip.
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