What keeps you busy these days?
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What keeps you busy these days?
I am very free nowadays, because I do not have any roles as a student or a worker, and I spend time completely on my own.
>>I am very free nowadays, because I do not have any tasks as a student or as a worker, and I spend the time completely my own way.
However, I cannot feel any freedom.
>>However, I do not feel any complete freedom.
There is a proper word in Korean to able to explain this situation.
>>There is a proper word in Korean to be able to explain this situation.
It is “yeoyu”.
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or>>The word is “yeoyu”.
We usually use this word when we are relaxed relying on not only time and money, but also psychological aspect.
>>We usually use this word when we are relaxed and not relying on time and money, as well as on any psychological aspect that could be involved.
Actually, the latter factor is much more important in order to use it.
>>Actually, the latter factor is much more important in order to be able to be totally at peace.
The person who is always peaceful and calm and do his or her job patiently, is called like ‘he or she has a lot of ‘yeoyu’ ’.
>>A person, who is always peaceful and calm, and does his or her job patiently, is described as having a lot of “yeoyu” ’.
On the other hand, I stand on the totally opposite position, now.
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or>>In contrast, I am now on the totally opposite side.
I wandered off and got lost from this question, but I find the simple answer of it.
>>I wandered off and got lost from this question, but I found the simple answer for it.
My mind, that I have to something when I am free, makes me feel like I am busy.
>>My mind is constantly working overtime when I am free, it makes me feel like I am busy.
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