What kind f books do you read? Why do you like it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I enjoy reading novel. Especially I really like moving story about family or friend. Whenever I want to cry or become emotional, I usually get stress out through sad story book. Also, the novel gives us important lesson in our life. There are various stories in a book and these are very realistic(similar with our real life). We can regret ourselves at that time. I always think \"Am I worth in this society?, How can I do in this situation?\" when I read a book. I want to be a better person than yesterday. Furthermore, novels are very easy to read because of stories. It is like a play. I don\'t get any stress when I read a novel. Reading books helps me imagine whatever I want. Because there is no image in the book, I have to visualize character\'s appearance, background and all of things. That\'s why most people recommend reading books than watching movie. Through books, I can improve my imaginative skill.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for this Mary!
I enjoy reading novel.
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Especially I really like moving story about family or friend.
>>> Especially, I really like moving story about family or friendship.
Whenever I want to cry or become emotional, I usually get stress out through sad story book.
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Also, the novel gives us important lesson in our life.
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There are various stories in a book and these are very realistic(similar with our real life).
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We can regret ourselves at that time.
>>> We can realize ourselves at that time.
>>> OR: We can reflect on ourselves at that time.
I always think \"Am I worth in this society?, How can I do in this situation?\" when I read a book.
>>> I always think \"Am I worth anything in this society? What can I do in this situation?\" when I read a book.
I want to be a better person than yesterday.
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Furthermore, novels are very easy to read because of stories.
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It is like a play.
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I don\'t get any stress when I read a novel.
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Reading books helps me imagine whatever I want.
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Because there is no image in the book, I have to visualize character\'s appearance, background and all of things.
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That\'s why most people recommend reading books than watching movie.
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Through books, I can improve my imaginative skill.
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