What kind of activity do you find invigorating?

2024-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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Working out can invigorate me. These days I use a gym on the mountain. There is a small mountain behind my house and a free gym is located there. There are lights, mirrors, and fans. When I go there, I work out using my health app, and then I feel invigorated.

강사 첨삭

Hi, MK!
It’s been a while since you last did your homework. Thank you for taking the time to answer this question. I totally agree! Working out can be exhausting, but at the same time, it can invigorate someone. Based on what you’ve mentioned, the location of the gym is very convenient for you, so at least you can go there anytime you need invigoration.
-T. Caitlyn 
Working out can invigorate me.
>> CORRECT
These days, I use a gym on the mountain.
>> CORRECT
There is a small mountain behind my house and a free gym is located there.
>> CORRECT
There are lights, mirrors, and fans.
>> CORRECT
When I go there, I work out using my health app, and then I feel invigorated.
>> CORRECT

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