What kind of animal would you like to have as a pet?
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I like to have as a Cat, Rabbit and a Hamster.
First, Cat is cute and it has many fur.
Secon, Rabbit is cute too, but it has many furs too.
Lastly, a Hamster is also cute and it will trash the poof.
I Iike many fur animal and these animals are I want to have as I have a pet.
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I would like to have a cat, a rabbit, or a hamster.
First, Cat is cute and it has many fur.
First, Cat is cute and it has many fur.
>> Firstly, cats are cute and furry.
Secon, Rabbit is cute too, but it has many furs too.
>> Secondly, like cats, rabbits are cute and and furry, too.
Lastly, a Hamster is also cute and it will trash the poof.
>> Lastly, hamsters are also cute, and they can throw their poop away.
I Iike many fur animal and these animals are I want to have as I have a pet.
>> I Iike many fur animals, and these animals are what I want to have as a pet.
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