What kind of bedroom would you want to have at your age? Describe it.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want night theme bedroom or the Middle Age theme bedroom.
In night theme, I want to twinkle stars and shine the moon.
In the Middle Age theme, I want to many flags and castle.
강사 첨삭
Good Thursday evening, Jimmy!
Here\'s your revised homework. Please go through the corrections, such as \"twinkling stars\" vs \"twinkle stars\". Have a good one!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What kind of bedroom would you want to have at your age? Describe it.
I want night theme bedroom or the Middle Age theme bedroom.
>> I want a night-theme bedroom or the Middle Ages theme bedroom.
In night theme, I want to twinkle stars and shine the moon.
>> For the night theme, I want twinkling stars and shining moon.
In the Middle Age theme, I want to many flags and castle.
>> For the Middle Ages theme, I want many flags and castles.
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