What kind of boss would you want to be if you had your own company?

2023-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I want to be a generous boss. Generosity makes employees feel at ease. Then, they can work with greater efficiency. But if they do something wrong, I will scold them. That\'s a boss\'s role.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름] U! ^^,)

Thank you for finding time to accomplish your homework. You did a good job here.

It\'s not easy to be a boss. Bosses experience stress, hardships and pressure.
A great boss is someone who inspires their employees to be their best selves.

I will see you later in class. Have a good night!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I want to be a generous boss.
>>> CORRECT
Generosity makes employees feel at ease.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Being generous puts others at ease.
Then, they can work with greater efficiency.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: They can then work more effectively.
But if they do something wrong, I will scold them. That\'s a boss\'s role.
>>> However, if they do something wrong, I will scold them. That\'s a boss\' role.

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