What kind of business do want to set up?
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1. What kind of business do want to set up?
When I was in my youth, I used to think about what setting up any business. But I`ve decided that I`d better not to set up a business for
a long times ago.
2. What are the dangers of having our own business?
There are lots of the business dangers. Financial affairs, Personnel and Products management risk, owner`s mind and so on. Over all
things, I think the faced business circumstances is the most business dangers.
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Thank you for this Sir Hyuji!
1. What kind of business do want to set up?
When I was in my youth, I used to think about what setting up any business.
1. What kind of business do want to set up?
When I was in my youth, I used to think about what setting up any business.
>>> When I was in my youth, I used to think about setting up any business of my own.
But I`ve decided that I`d better not to set up a business for a long times ago.
>>> But I`ve decided that I`d better not set up a business a long time ago.
2. What are the dangers of having our own business?
There are lots of the business dangers. Financial affairs, Personnel and Products management risk, owner`s mind and so on.
There are lots of the business dangers. Financial affairs, Personnel and Products management risk, owner`s mind and so on.
>>> OR: There are many risks in running a business such as financial affairs, personnel and products management risk, owner`s mind and so on.
Over all things, I think the faced business circumstances is the most business dangers.
>>> Above all this, I think facing unexpected business circumstances is the biggest danger in running a business.
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