What kind of business do you think would be successful during this pandemic?

2021-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it will be online communication applications like zoom. Because most of people use these apps. So they can be successful.

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Hi [이름]:)

The impact of COVID-19, particularly on the business world, couldn’t have been predicted but has been an incredible learning experience—especially for aspiring entrepreneurs. Social distancing and remote work have forced traditional in-person businesses like restaurants, brick-and-mortar retail and event services to get creative with solutions and stay viable while also opening a world of opportunities for business owners to meet consumers’ new and evolving needs that is why I think you suggestion is good.

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I think it will be online communication applications like zoom.

>> I think online communication apps like zoom are going to be successful.

Because most of people use these apps.

>> Most people use this app nowadays.

So they can be successful.

>> That is why I think it will be successful.

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