What kind of business do you want to establish? Share your answer in a short paragraph.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to start my business by establishing an accounting firm, and get new clients. As the size of business is bigger, then I will hire at least three accountants to divide work and two customer service representatives.
강사 첨삭
Hello Judy!
It seems like you have already planned your future. Building your own business or empire starts with plans like this. Thus, when you become an accountant, I hope you won\'t forget me.
Thank you for sharing your dream to me. I will see you on our next class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: I want to start my business by establishing an accounting firm and getting new clients.
Or: I want to start my business by establishing an accounting firm and getting new clients.
As the size of business is bigger, then I will hire at least three accountants to divide work and two customer service representatives.
>> Correct!
>> Correct!
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